| [oniro-wg] Editorial change to Oniro Working Group Charter |
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Hello, I have one editorial note to a draft of Oniro Working Group Charter. In the text “EFSP” is mentioned 3 times in Specification Committee->Powers
and Duties. It can be easily deducted from the context as well as Applicable Documents section, that EFSP stands for Eclipse Foundation Specification Process, but it is nowhere directly indicated. Thus I suggest to modify the text as below: It is:
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Work with the related Project Management Committee (PMC) to ensure that the EFSP is complied with by all related working group specification
projects. (…) To be:
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Work with the related Project Management Committee (PMC) to ensure that the
Eclipse Foundation Specification Process
(EFSP) is complied with by all related working group specification projects.
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Define (if any) customizations to the EFSP. The EFSP with the approved customizations is the specification process to be used by all specifications
related to this working group, and refer for approval by the Steering Committee. Best regards, Jarek |