Hi,
We hope this updated version will be the last one :-)
Regards
Marcelo Paternostro a écrit :
Hi David,
A quick heads up: pages 11 and 12 mention EMF instead of Ecore Tools.
Perhaps you could fix them and re-submit.
Best regards,
Marcelo Paternostro
IBM Toronto Lab
1-905-413-3942
marcelop@xxxxxxxxxx
 David Sciamma
---05/21/2008 06:04:21 AM---Hi,
Hi,
Here is an updated version of the slides for the Ganymede Release
Review.
(See attached file: EcoreTools-Ganymede-release-review.zip)
Regards,
David
Marcelo Paternostro a écrit :
Hi David,
A few comments,
- Do you mind saying the odp as ppt. Don't get me wrong; I wish
everything was "open" ;-) but we were asked to submit ppts.
- I am attaching here the very last version of the EMF slides. As you
can see, I've removed the "What is EMF". The only slide introducing the
component is the one with the "pretty picture". Perhaps you could do
the same.
- The talking points slides are extremely important. They are the ones
that will end up in the mini-deck. They should come right after the
slide in the title. Pls try to keep them as short as possible (2 slides
for examples).
- Page 3: The "..." seems like an incomplete list. Do you mind removing
it?
- Page 8: You should mention the dates you've missed (if any)
- Every first time you use a trademark "word", you should write TM next
to it (to put it on the "upper" side of the work, press
'Ctrl'+'Shit'+'=' in PowerPoint). An example is Java in slide 7. Also,
look ar EMF's last page. I think you should have a page like that with
the last 2 bullets ("Java ..." and "Other companies...")
- Look at EMF's page 16 and 17. These pages are mandatory (of course
you need to make sure everything that they are saying are actually
true).
- EMF's page 20. Also mandatory. If you do have a plan, pls indicate
the link where people can read it.
When you are done with your changes, you can send the ppt and pdf files
either to me for a second review or directly to both emo@xxxxxxxxxxx
and modeling-pmc@xxxxxxxxxxx.
Please don't forget that the deadline is tomorrow.
(See attached file: EMF_Ganymede_Review.zip)
Best regards,
Marcelo Paternostro
IBM Toronto Lab
1-905-413-3942
marcelop@xxxxxxxxxx
 David Sciamma
---05/19/2008 10:53:00 AM---Hi,
Hi,
Find attached my slide deck for the Ganymede Release Review (Ecore
Tools EMFT component) in PDF and OpenOffice formats.
Comments/suggestions are welcome.
David
Ed Merks a écrit :
Guys,
I belive there are still some of you for whom I don't think we've had
much reaction. I'm not looking forward to unpleasant scruitiny at the
Tuesday PMC meeting because of missing slides... :-( There is
significant risk that your component will simply be dropped from the
Ganymede release and worse yet, from the modeling package. Please try
to have at least a draft ready Tuesday morning. Note that Monday is a
holiday in Canada.
Ed Merks/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA
mailto: merks@xxxxxxxxxx
905-413-3265 (t/l 313)
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05/16/2008 07:36 AM
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Guys,
We really need those slide decks in time for next week's deadline. I
think we have them form Lucas and Martin so far. Note that it's a
holiday in Canada on Monday, so we really need them all by Tuesday.
Please include Marcelo on the CC list when you send them since he and
Nick organizing and reviewing them...
Ed Merks/Toronto/IBM@IBMCA
mailto: merks@xxxxxxxxxx
905-413-3265 (t/l 313)
(It is possible you have already received these files from all 7
Ganymede EMFT component leads [1]. If that is the case, please
disregard
this email and its attachment.)
Attached are the Abouts for the 7 EMFT components in Ganymede: EMF
Search, EMF Compare, Teneo, Ecore Tools, CDO, Net4j, Mint.
These were generated as follows:
a) First, sources were collected from the mapfiles using this script
[2].
b) Next, Jeff McAffer's org.eclipse.orbit.releng.aboutextractor tool
[3]
was used to collect the about files for each mapfile's sources into a
new directory.
c) Finally, those 7 directories were zipped and attached here.
If for some reason the attached file's contents are not what you need,
let me know.
TIA,
--
Nick Boldt :: Release Engineer, IBM Toronto Lab
Eclipse Modeling :: http://www.eclipse.org/modeling
http://wiki.eclipse.org/index.php/User:Nickb
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[1] http://wiki.eclipse.org/Ganymede#EMFT
[2] http://wiki.eclipse.org/index.php/CVS_Source_From_Mapfile
[3]
http://dev.eclipse.org/mhonarc/lists/cross-project-issues-dev/msg02409.html
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