Re: [iot-wg] Eclipse IoT Whitepaper - The Three Software Stacks Required

[Benjamin Cabé <benjamin@xxxxxxxxxxx>]

Thanks Ian. Not sure what happened. I fixed it (now reads: Each stack should have defined APIs that allow for easy integration with existing applications and integration with *other IoT solutions.*).

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Le 5 oct. 2016 à 12:51, Ian Campbell <ian.campbell.aus@xxxxxxxxx> a écrit :

Page 9 - Defined APIs seems to end abruptly on the word 'with'.  I am using Adobe reader on android.

On 5 Oct 2016 20:24, "Benjamin Cabé" <benjamin@xxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

Thanks Kai!

My answers in-line below:

> Here is what struck me when reading through it:
>
> 1) On page 8 you are referring to "Event Management and Application Enablement"
> and "Analytics and Visualization" as two of the core features. However, in the
> diagram on page 7 the layers are "Event Management & Analytics" and "Application
> Enablement", i.e. they are grouped differently. Is that on purpose?

Not really on purpose, and good catch, thanks! I think I like the grouping & positioning in the diagram better (i.e having App Enablement / API at the very top) than the text.
How about:

* Event Management and Analytics (layer before top) – scalable event processing capabilities, and abilities to consolidate and analyse data.
* Application Enablement and Data Visualization (top layer) – ability to create reports, graphs, dashboards, etc. and to use API for application integration.

>
> 2) On page 14 you write "Eclipse Hono provides connectivity support for MQTT,
> CoAP and LWM2M, as well as an extensible framework to add other protocols."
> While this is certainly the goal, we are far from it at this point in time. Maybe
> it should better read "Eclipse Hono provides a uniform API for interacting with
> devices using arbitrary protocols, as well as an extensible framework to add
> other protocols."

+1. I made the change - it most certainly was an oversight, sorry.

Thanks very much for the feedback Kai, much appreciated.
Of course, feedback from others is most welcome too :-)

Benjamin –
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