| ROM Feedback: ROM Overview [message #1564] |
Tue, 04 January 2005 19:15  |
 Sven Boden
Messages: 15
Registered: July 2009 |
Junior Member |
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For some late feedback on the "BIRT Report Object Model - Overview" document
in the requirements. I'm very much ok with the contents, I did find some
spelling mistakes, but these are not that important. If the document would
ever be updated maybe the following corrections could be included:
p 5. "Base element: many element definitions derived from another element",
should be "Base element: many element definitions derive from another
element definition." (remove the d of derived)
p 6. "or is contains characters", should be "or it contains characters"
(change is into it)
p 7. add semi-colon behind: "... that provides the element definitions"
p 7. add semi-colon behind: "Provides a summary of the item"
p 8. "Properties are name/value pair, with", should be "Properties are
name/value pairs, with" (add s to pair)
p 8. "or a list of simple structure.", should be "or a list of simple
structures." (add s to structures)
p 8. add semi-colon behind: "the point in time defined by the script"
p 9. "For example, a sales summary report may have show a list of closed
sales", should be "For example, a sales summary report may show a list of
closed sales" (remove have)
p 9. "in the sales summary report, limit the lists to those deals in a
particular region", should probably be "in the sales summary report, limit
the lists to only those deals in a particular region" (add only)
p 10. "but a suite of related reports", should be "but of a suite of related
reports" (add of)
p 10. "speed development and reduce maintenance costs", should be "speed up
development and reduce maintenance costs" (add up)
p 14. "The master page is the mechanisme for page set". I don't understand
it in the current context: "page set"?
p 16. "or it can internal structure", should be "or it can be an internal
structure" (add "can be")
p 18. "definition element simply provide access", should be "definition
element simply provides access" (add s to provide)
p 21. key="resourceKey, should be key="resourceKey" (add a quote to the end
of the attribute value, this has to be done twice)
Regards,
Sven Boden
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